First Draft, Five Minute Film - Nightmares

This is the first draft of our five minute, short film - Nightmares.

This version of the film tells the complete story, but there are some major changes we need to make in terms of editing. We need to work on smoothing out the transitions between each sequence (day), and feedback from the viewers offer other suggested changed also:

We'll keep the comments in mind, particularly those regarding the use of a colour corrector and making the transition between the days smoother and more clear.

We have received a lot of positive feedback regarding the film however, from other members of the class and other Media classes alike, a lot of praise about the film has also come from tutors at the college.